Update (10/15/17): Pt. 2 of "October Orchards" is currently in the works! Will be a little while yet, but out ASAP. :)

3.28.2015

Poem: "Dawning Day"

CC image by Theophilos Papadopoulos via Flickr

Dawning Day
By: Eve Estelle

Beautiful are these colored skies,
With burning yellows and a blaze of red;
Filled with more wisdom than the wisest of wise,
It's a promise to us that a new day's ahead.

Rising fire, burning sphere,
Yesterday's troubles.. don't belong here.
Leave behind your old sorrows,
Take a breath and clear your mind;
Just watch the sky, watch how it glows,
Forget for now, the daily grind.

11 comments:

  1. Your poems just get better :)
    Amazing work yet again :D

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    1. There's always room for improvement! Thanks Neal! :D

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  2. I need to paint this all over my walls in ever house I live and ever plan on living in. Yes, it's that good. And it's something I need to remember. ALWAYS because I tend to focus more on the bad than the good.

    ~India^_________________^

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    1. Awe, I'm so glad you like it that much, India. lol! Life is definitely so much easier—and just overall better—when you focus more on the good side of things. Even if it's a tiny little sliver of a "silver lining," it's still something. It can be hard sometimes to do that, but it's so worth learning to do! Thanks for commenting!

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  3. Beautiful just like the sky at dawn ...the picture is beautiful too.

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    1. Thank you. :) I thought so too—I kept searching for others as I wasn't sure if this fit the poem well enough, but I always ended back up at this one. I think it works well!

      Hey, also, quick question: I've been trying to figure out if people who comment on my posts are able to receive email notifications when I reply to their comments. Do you happen to get any?

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    2. Yes i do because i tick the 'notify me' box before posting my comment,cause i don't want to miss when you reply...have fun.

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    3. Ohh good! Another commenter said they didn't have the "Notify me" option, so I was afraid my template somehow got rid of email notifications! Thanks Seema, that's a big help. :)

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  4. Amazing Poem Eve (: Thanks for sharing it!

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    1. Thank you for reading, Hp! So glad you liked it. :)

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